1 files changed, 6 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/advanced_example.md b/advanced_example.md
index 5b5013b8..7c924a1c 100644
--- a/advanced_example.md
+++ b/advanced_example.md
@@ -1,5 +1,3 @@
-This example is based on https://stackoverflow.com/questions/17016175/c-unordered-map-using-a-custom-class-type-as-the-key/17017281#17017281, adapted to use CMap and CString instead of std::unordered_map and std::string.

-

 To be able to use CMap (or one of the other unordered associative containers) with a user-defined key-type, you need to define two things:

 

 1. A hash function; this must be a function that calculates the hash value given an object of the key-type.

@@ -31,10 +29,9 @@ void person_destroy(struct Person* p) {
   cstring_destroy(&p->surname);

 }

 ```

-In order to use it as a CMap key, provide a "view" of your class, that owns no resources (e.g. CStrings):

+In order to use Person as a map key, provide a "view" of your class that owns no resources (e.g. CString):

 ```

-struct PersonView

-{

+struct PersonView {

   const char* name;

   const char* surname;

   int age;

@@ -52,7 +49,7 @@ int personview_compare(const struct PersonView* x, const struct PersonView* y) {
   return memcmp(&x->age, &y->age, sizeof(x->age));

 }

 ```

-Here is a simple hash function that combines the three member's hashes:

+And a hash function that combines the three member's hashes:

 ```

 size_t personview_hash(const struct PersonView* pv, size_t ignore) {

   // Compute individual hash values for name, surname and age

@@ -65,14 +62,14 @@ size_t personview_hash(const struct PersonView* pv, size_t ignore) {
   return res;

 }

 ```

-With this in place, we can declare the map Person => int:

+With this in place, we can declare the map Person -> int:

 ```

 declare_CMap(ex, struct Person, int, c_noDestroy,

                  personview_hash, personview_compare, person_destroy,

                  struct PersonView, person_getView, person_fromView);

 

 ```

-Note we use struct PersonView to put keys in the map, but is stored as struct Person.

+Note we use struct PersonView to put keys in the map, but keys are stored as struct Person with proper dynamically allocated CStrings to store name and surname.

 ````

 int main()

 {

@@ -90,6 +87,6 @@ int main()
   cmap_ex_destroy(&m6);

 }

 ```

-CMap will automatically use personview_hash() as defined above for the hash value calculations, and the personview_compare() for equality checks.

+CMap uses personview_hash() for hash value calculations, and the personview_compare() for equality checks.

 The cmap_ex_destroy() function will free CStrings name, surname and the value for each item in the map, in addition to the CMap hash table itself.